Comments : Dreaming of my ending

  • 16 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I know how you feel. I often find myself wishing I was dead(like now for example). Anways great poem. Shanik

  • 16 years ago

    by Poe Syndrome

    Good poem :) i have felt that way, but try not to feel that way all the time, eventually it can kill you.
    keep writing!

  • 15 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    This poem is actually amazing.
    You just structure it better, but other than that I honestly like it. It was emotional and very creative.