Comments : My Heart Is Dead.

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Nope that is really good, well done xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Wow..I feel the exact same way..You expressed it so wonderfully...

    The ending was so straight...I liked it...

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow beautiful, Amber this isnice, you have kept the consecutive rhymes very well. I loved the structure and how you have put the words. Short wordings with great meanings 5/5 all the way

    tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    I enjoyed reading this. even with the short lines the emotion is expressed so well..i could feel your pain while reading it.
    great job! a beautiful and moving poem!

    I hope you stay strong hunn.
    great work! =]
    --Viola

  • 16 years ago

    by katy

    Hey it mite be a short poem but i really liked that really good :) xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    This was a beautiful and emotional poem...i really like the way your emotion poured it self out wit your words...keep writing...

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    I don't think the short lines takes away from the poem or the meaning. I like it. Great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Oh wow..really beautifully written..even tho it was short I really leiked it..very sad.. emotional..powerful words..well done..good job
    I give u 5/5 u deserve it!
    -sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by the come back

    Full of emotion.....nice poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by willowoman

    Dame girl how do you do it your only 13?
    your good