I really did like this. It was unique and really well written. I found it to be amazing how you can write in another language it shows creativity. Another good piece of poetry by you which I'm sure many would appreciate expecially those who can speak that language. Well done~mel

This is really unique =]! It's funny that in your second language everything ends with: Ey. Why is that =]?
The English translation of it, is beautiful as well. It's cute too^_^
5/5

I like this even thou i dont speak this type of indian my is more the tamil side of it... the english translation was awesome....

rosie

Good job your really taltented i think its cool that its in another language besides english keep it up

Yeh i can understand both language. that was nice poem take care 5/5

Whoah itz sooo cool ,first of all let me know where did you learn soo much to earn all this hindi u rote,reli very nice piece of work done,gosh i am sooo happy....i have had soo many shocks in one day..lol..i completed hp today and it left me enthralled,and now ur poem left me charmed...5/5..i hv cast my vote..keep it up and hopin to see loads and loads more....
your true reader too........
Malini....

Interesting poem. I don't prefer love poetry but this poem is powerfully written. You created great atmosphere and described emotions incredibly.
Well done, it deserves 5/5

Very interesting piece when translated...
Like the message. Good job!!

I know nothing about the hindi language but, the english version was beautiful. Although, it was really neat to see the two together. Great write. 5/5

marcella

Wow!I wish I could do something like that.It was truely amazing.I think it is awesome that you wrote it in both hindi&english.5/5

<3Amber

Fsams
Very beautiful piece. The English version is truely lovely.
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

Very good... i like how you made it in hindi.. i understood alittle of it but i can't read it very well..

keep it up

:)

You are soo talented and i loved this poem it makes me wanna read it again and again! I love the way you use your words and it was just great over all i wish i could write like you ! If you ever have a chance if you could read some of poems and give me some pointers i would appreciate it!

Beautiful in any language....the language of love is universal!!!!

That was a very good poem! its cool. it must have been hard writting it in a diffrent language. it had a great tone

I'm very impressed, I've written a few hindi poems myself, but never had luck in translating them so precisely.. well done.. 5/5. Please take a look at mine, then it'd be great.

Not your best work

Great poem
i was trying to read thefirst one i didnt understand any word hehe
the translated one is gr8 :)

Very beautiful poem!!

Wow this is amazing!!! i love how you took you own culture and made it this.
and the words are amazing this is one that i really like! 5/5

laura