That is very cute!!!
It was different to see it in another language. good idea! A very deep piece. You deffinatley have a talent.

Wow, it's amazing that you can write in another language! and the translation was great. Wow. 5/5 and if i could give you more, i would!

kara

Nice work i think you went beyond expectations when you wrote it in hindi because not to many people know second languages...im learning spanish and i no i could right a poem using it lol but nice work
5/5

This was good.
I wonder what it sounds like in hindi?Lol
But great job. A very beautiful peice!
5/5
((Amber))

It was really cute and well done...I bet it was hard writting that in a different language...Anyway...Good Job it was beautiful..

5/5...

This poem is really deep and very beautiful, it gave me loads of imagery. Truely an amazing poem, a really deserved 5/5 from me

x

Great poem.
Funny you wrote it in two laguages.
Seems difficult.
Sweet poem.
Really enjoyed reading it.
Take care

Wow!
I really liked this.
its really unique
*&&* truely amazing...
Great Job =]]

Thats really cool you did it in a diffrent laguage, well hindi. i really loved the poem! 5/5 i may add it to my favorites! it was beautiful! the flow was awesome i really loved the first stanza

Very beautiful! Usually in trantslation the poem looses it's beauty but it was still beautiful! And flowed pretty good.
5/5

I really do like the one, as i am a fan of love poems!! sry it took me so long to come and return the favor, ive been busy... but im really glad i read this, its cute, and really enjoyable.. good job
<3
5/5

I really enjoyed this one.
I could really feel and relate too the heartfelt emotion's seeping from your words.
It was penned beautifully.
5/5 Elaine.

Wow that was cool, the whole different language thing, i loved it... great idea, it was wonderful.

This is beautiful and elegantly written.
I love the depth and emotion you used in this piece, and the imagery you painted created very vivid pictures.

Buhat khoob, muje buhat pasand aya..

as always this was a great poem by a great poet that deserve nothing less than a 5/5

keep it up

I think it was a good poem. Writing it in a different language was very creative. Good job. But I agree, with an earlier comment about the clumsy vibe.
3/5

Excellent, you're lucky to be bilingual, i wish i was. Great poem by the way, really enjoyed it.

Looking forward to write rewrite your poem in dutch, my language.
Well I enjoyed your love poem.

Lovely I must say...though sum words in hindi spelled wrong Like Ullahaey should be udhaey...but very well penned and what amuses me da most that you penned it all da more well in english and thats awesome...so 5/5 keep it up...

Maybe because its translated almost directly, i dont know - there are just a few parts that dont make complete sense. But the general poem is sweet.