Comments : Demons

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very nicely worded and written creatively. I like the way words strung each other making it cohesive. Plse make note of these corrections...do you think they are/their kind, my dear, they are/their not kind

    Keep it up
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Wow...this poem is awesome and very true. creatvie also. =) great job

  • 15 years ago

    by noha

    Its realy good and dark and always you got fears,and its good that you know this and try to face well done