Great poem as always dear....... keep it up

This poem was really different. An enjoyable read none the less. I saw this contest and thought this would be one of the better titles to pick. The word choice I liked. It was simple and really effective forming a good flow. A calm poem that was pretty enjoyable to read. Well done.~mel

Very cute poem with strong wordings and a unique structure. Your life poems are really beautiful and natural :)

Tc 5/5
Fsams

Excellent with great word choice and flow. Iloved the structure and your imagery

Charming. While adorable and cute, the poem was insightful and provocative in terms of family relations and life itself. Nice one.

Lovely. x]
It was very cute. I could imagine the whole poem in my head. The flow was flawless & the word choice was good. You def. should win the contest with this one. 5.5 Wonderful job!

- Stephyy <3