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by debbylyn Jul 24, 2007
Love, romance /
i love you
A universe within thine eyes delight
Tears well and spill the heaven's mirrored stars
Celestial dreams in hazel tinted night
Eternal pools displaying rippled scars
Your sweet caress my empty arms denied
Longing words fall to silent lonely cries
A poet's verse to quell the ebbing tide
Through lips bereft of whispered breaths and sighs
Oh Love! beseech the night's divine intent
One last bequest of morning's perfect smile
Against thy breast a beating heart content
Embracing gentle comfort for a while
Day breaks her golden glorious sorrow
Blissful slumber keep us 'til the morrowTo My Love Barry
Love it 5/5
by Rachel RTVW
How pretty. Good job with this form.
by Ingrid de Klerck
This is a superb sonnet, I will be reading more of your poems in the future!
by Reminders Torture
This was great.So sweet, So touching.It created vivid pictures.And excellent choice of words.The rhyming was excellent.Great Job!
Take care <3
by Shirani Graham
WonderfuF poeM! MeaningfuL, toO. 5/5