Trust.

by Run out of words   Jul 24, 2007


It's something I've never felt before,
I guess the word is trust.
He brought out what I never thought I had in store,
it was so much more than lust.

I thought I'd never find someone,
like him because he's perfect.
And now I'm scared this is all a dream...
because it looks a bit too perfect.

I'm scared that it's all just going to end,
they way it always has before.
I'm scared he won't be interested in me,
I guess my hearts just sore.

I'm nothing more than a teenager who whines,
who thinks this is too much of a fairytale.
But the the teenager who whines has a heart as well,
it's just got too many nails.

I'm giving you my heart,
because you said you would guard it.
And I could trust you with anything.
Please don't break it...because I don't have an endless supply,
of medicine to reduce the stings.

Please don't break it,
I'm trusting you.
And I'm letting you know,
you can trust me too.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shauna

    Great Work!!

    5.5**
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    In the second stanza it was a bit weird how you rhymed perfect with itself. But perfect is a hard word to rhyme with. And the second to last stanza kinda didnt seem to fit, I mean the idea of it did, but the rhythm and the way it was written didnt.
    Other than that I really like this poem! Its so full of emotion! You can really tell exactly what you felt while you wrote this....the love and slight pain and the fear of losing him. Great Job!!

    ~Morgan~

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very emoional poem with touch of sadness... Nicely written... Keep writing!