Very emoional poem with touch of sadness... Nicely written... Keep writing!

In the second stanza it was a bit weird how you rhymed perfect with itself. But perfect is a hard word to rhyme with. And the second to last stanza kinda didnt seem to fit, I mean the idea of it did, but the rhythm and the way it was written didnt.
Other than that I really like this poem! Its so full of emotion! You can really tell exactly what you felt while you wrote this....the love and slight pain and the fear of losing him. Great Job!!

~Morgan~

Great Work!!

5.5**
<3