Comments : Forbidden love

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Where pleasure is vast, doom is known. Emotion is bodily call. Love is demonstrated kindness. Within pain relieved, Love whispers.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Love it, great job, I fell in love with this poem you have passion in your words, fantasic, I can't wait to read more

  • 11 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    So heart-touching..
    Love n care heal every hurt heart ...such magical things they are.
    Hope u'll be fine soon..understand the reality in life n be able to move on..