Comments : Needing Peace

  • 16 years ago

    by Lethmelodis

    This poem hit me hard. I'm not sure why, but I feel like I can relate to it. Excellent choice of words and rhythm used to portray sadness.

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    The peace you seek will come one day soon. Your angel is always by your side, search deep and you will see. I agree with both above me, we can all relate to a point with your words, it does hit home. Very heartfelt and filled with sadness.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    A brilliant poem ,wonderfully written again, sad , but good to know that you have an angel to watch over you as I to have one waiting to call on me at anytime, but yet , we never go till it is our time, you did s great job on this piece makes me proud, please keep it up . your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    A peom i cn relate.. awesome gr8 wrk!!!!