Wow. This poem is just dripping with emotion. I loved it. The last line was really good but so were the others. This is really good..and I like what the poem is about.Very Nice!5/5

Brit

Smugness, m'dear. This piece sweltered an intense smugness throughout the page. Yet I didn't particularly feel the sadness. Rather, I felt the subject's haughtiness as a result of its tone of voice. Quite an out of the ordinary way to portray a broken relationship. =] Kudos, Sheena! (^^,)

5.5, as always. Heh.
Marian.

As you said everyone will interpret how they want, but the way I looked at it was great.
The flow was beautiful and just the way your emotions were portrayed by such expressions and descriptions. Wow.
But great job!
5/5
((Amber))