Comments : 13th Floor Elevators.

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    This was a beautiful peice.
    The meaning was kind of confusing but to each man his own right? Your flow was good and your choice of words were amazing!
    Great job!
    5/5
    ((Amber))

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    I loved this peice, up until the last line. I guess it's supposed to stand out, but it just seems out of place. Otherwise a good poem and don't mind me lol.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    This is kind of a creepy poem! the title was catchy so was the poem!