Wow, even in your 6th grade you were an amazing writer.
this poems shows the beauty of a great poem and shows your great talent.
keep up the great work as always.

a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

OMG 6th grade?? Wow I loved this piece. It really shows your versatility and ability to write poems. The rhymes are beautiful with nice vocab used. The rhythm is there in this piece. 5/5 all the way

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Excellent poem. 5/5 all the way and no flaws in this piece

The merriment and innocence brought forth by the young character was charming. The pitch was jovially pleasing and the emotion raw and well conveyed. This was a joy to read. I truly enjoyed this piece, Stephanie.

I wish I could of wrote like that when i was in 6th grade lol, very nice. 5/5 always.