My last goodbye

by Max Krakers   Jul 27, 2007


In my live,
Two girls I loved.
Yet to love them both,
Nearly got me stuffed.

The two girls are special,
And both are great.
I had to choose,
Had to set my mind straight.

Then suddenly,
My decision was made.
Since four words you said,
Had closed your gate.

All these years,
I never knew.
If all the rumors,
I heard where true.

But then I heard it,
From your own mouth.
Those few words,
Caused my mind to cloud.

You have a boyfriend,
Who you love so much.
I won't destroy that,
True love, I won't touch.

It Broke my heart,
To write this poem.
So at it's end,
I'll let you go.

If you read this my love,
Then you will know why.
This poem is called,
My last goodbye.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Hollywood

    This is so sad.
    I love it. Emotion speaks nothing
    but the truth. No one can hide there emtions.
    It was so sad and I think that almost everyone has been through this situation at least once. Mann Im so sorry and I hope one day you will find someone who loves you and cares about you just as much as you love them.
    5/5
    Take Care,
    Kortney

  • 15 years ago

    by i care about him

    This is a beautiful poem. It really makes me think since I am in the same situation with a couple guys... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Okay this Poem I loved IT SO SO SO MUCH
    but. you have a few spelling mistakes... if you don't mind me saying...
    1. it isn't good buy it's goodbye
    and 2. in the 2nd to last stanza u spelled heart with an h at the end

    but besides that Your poem was BEAUTIFUL!!!
    <3<3<3<3 5/5
    -Liz

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