Comments : My last goodbye

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Okay this Poem I loved IT SO SO SO MUCH
    but. you have a few spelling mistakes... if you don't mind me saying...
    1. it isn't good buy it's goodbye
    and 2. in the 2nd to last stanza u spelled heart with an h at the end

    but besides that Your poem was BEAUTIFUL!!!
    <3<3<3<3 5/5
    -Liz

  • 15 years ago

    by i care about him

    This is a beautiful poem. It really makes me think since I am in the same situation with a couple guys... 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollywood

    This is so sad.
    I love it. Emotion speaks nothing
    but the truth. No one can hide there emtions.
    It was so sad and I think that almost everyone has been through this situation at least once. Mann Im so sorry and I hope one day you will find someone who loves you and cares about you just as much as you love them.
    5/5
    Take Care,
    Kortney