This is a realy good piece. Kep writing.

This is awesome i wish i could write that good.

This connects to you other poem it seems like nice job. again it flows well. you used strogn words

Aww another sweet one
i hope the best of luck to you and your new family :)

Aww i like this.
especially this line:
CUZ I BELIEVE HEAVEN HOOKED US UP
it's sweet.
great job again! keep it up.
--Viola

THANX A LOT YOUR POEMS AINT 2 SHABBY EITHER

AWWWW i LiEK DiSZ iSZ SO KUTE ND AYO i LUV DiSZ LiNE
-CUZ I BELIEVE HEAVEN HOOKED US UP
iTSZ SO EFFiN KUTE LOLSZ
GUDD JOB
STAY UP
MUHASZZZZZZZZZ
-iiM SUCH A BEAUTiiFUL DiiASTER

Nice write

Great poem hun! i can tell it came from the heart! nice flow as well!
great job! keep writing! i promise ill read! :)

This is such a good poem hun!! it was well said and flowed REALLY well!! great job and keep writing!! <3

"NEVER THOUGHT THAT I'D HIT IT"

lol i loved it and this part made me laugh i love the way it flowed and its so real im glad ur happy

This poem was good... keep up the great work!

I may be the only one but it needs work. I'm not being mean I'm trying to help you so don't get angery if I tell you what I like and what I don't like. Well first of all whenever someone uses all caps it's very distracting from the poem. It makes the person seem less professional along with not using correct spelling and so forth. Now since it's poetry yes you can go with tha insted of the it's ok that's just how you are I'm fine with that it's just not something I'm big on unless it's an excelent poem. I can see you're trying to show some visual images for the poem which is good it's just I'm very distracted from all of the capitalized font. I have no doubt that a lot of people like it an give you good rateings it's just not me though to give someone something good just for the attempt. You need to work on not using all of the capital letters along with using things like 4ever or something along those lines. I would asume that you've gotten so many votes in these short days from commenting people and asking for favors. Good strategy but I have to give you a 2. Good idea to show images, but the font is too distracting, the way you type it I'm not big on, and it seems kind of off. One line talks about hiding it from brothers and then it goes off into a completly different direction. It's choppy. I'm not insulting you I promise. I'm giving you my advice that you may choose to follow ony if you wish.

Beautiful love it

NICE

I like this poem its very niceee

Hey nice poem i really like it :P good job