Comments : Silence

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    Sourav, its one of the best poem i have read in recent times.The meaning goes so deep.Almost like silent overpowering the need of words.Very impressive write.Its good to read your poem again.
    Hope to read more soon.
    Keep writing.

    Best wishes
    chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by Run out of words

    =) it was very beautiful...and described the aspects of a very "hard to explain" subject...life. Very nice write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sourav
    What a deep intense thought provoking write. Imagery is excellent.

    Tears drop like autumn leaves
    Smile seems life's jocosity
    Pretension fails when life deceives
    Solemnly appraising the life's aridity

    This stanza is awesome.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Deep and emotional.
    Very good imagery.
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem was really beautifully written...The imagery was perfect..And the flow was flawless...Good job...
    Take care
    And thank you for your comment on my poem..

  • 16 years ago

    by Biya

    Souravvv ! This is just superb poem no doubt !

    and these two stanzas are really very meaningful , Infact , whole poem conveys a great message but I like these two begnining stanazas of the poem:

    Quietly observing the laugh
    Quietly absorbing the pain
    Though being mum is bit tough
    Silently watching blood going through the drain

    Don't read this poem aloud
    As silence says thousand words
    I've covered the words with a shroud
    Sometimes silence is life's biggest reward

    Amazingly Superb !
    Biya

  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow that was very emotional & strong yet great and deep...well written & beautifully penned ... 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Silence has noise.
    Good written

  • 15 years ago

    by Ali Khan

    AALA emotional poem grasps the reader attention..
    Tears drop like autumn leaves
    Smile seems life's jocosity
    Pretension fails when life deceives
    Solemnly appraising the life's aridity

    the special thing is
    i can relate to it ....loved it!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Miu

    Wow. It was just deep poem, and the silence you wrote about, we tend to hardly have a moment of silence in these days. Felt the sad tone through the whole piece. I really liked that.

    Amazing work! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    As silence says thousand words
    I've covered the words with a shroud
    Sometimes silence is life's biggest reward

    thses three lines are wonderful.
    nice poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by Zara Baines

    I really apritiate you commenting on my poem, i have added another today.
    the ending to this one was really powerful and ur use of language was realy good

  • 15 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh silence is golden
    5/5 excellent write

  • 15 years ago

    by gracey grey

    This is a magnificient write.Very subtle but I can totally relate with it.Very nice.

  • 15 years ago

    by Bare My Paradox

    The poem has depth, its powerful yet subtle....i love it !

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    I love the title of this poem. and the words are amazing, a wonderful write!! keep it up =]

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Great poem , i can see you are talented !5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    That was a great read. Language used was excellent, flow went well. I think the subject of the poem was very good, great job.

    As silence says thousand words
    - True.

    Thanks for reading my poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by Blueleo

    I once heard that true friendship is the ability to enjoy the companionship of a friend without needing to say a word. That made me ponder over the people I've been friends with through time and realized that the most precious moments were indeed the ones where words need not be exchanged. A random shared smile at a distant memory. The ability to know how the other person thinks and being able to communicate with a few words if any at all. This brought me back in time to a beautiful place where responsibility was a distant care and where fun was always number one. Thanks for the read and the memories. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Awesome poem!
    :D
    @_@

    Thanks for commenting mine. :3