Comments : Power

  • 16 years ago

    by Jochsey

    That was good well written good job
    5/5
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    And i just updated my profile

  • 16 years ago

    by Ajmal

    Hmm...its good..
    ur poem makes me think alot..
    nicely writen,i like the flow and way u wrote it..
    overall it was great!!
    keep it up..

  • 16 years ago

    by rachael

    Very diverse style, it's cool. i can tell you know a lot about this. the arrangement was different but refreshing. and it kinda rhymes! which would be for me an achievement coz i cant really rhyme much.well done.=)

  • 15 years ago

    by becca

    Amazing! an absolutely stunning poem left me with a lot to think on =D
    loved it keep it up =D
    xXx