Love the metaphor of the smiling sun! It does seem that way on a beautiful summer's day....nice!

Hey, Gem, this was a delightful Haiku of a sunny/summer's day. I wished you sunshines on your head. :) I like it when a poem uses the word smile; it simply makes me smile, too. Hehe...

Be well and keep smiling.

Love,
Debbie

Gem
Wonderful sunshiney Haiku :)
Take Care
Love Cindy

A really, really good Haiku...really!

This is beautiful...so much imagery and emotion in such a small form, and I loved the metaphor you used...beautiful!

The word solar tells me that the sun is giving more the warm smiles 2 us :P hey :) i just got outt a jain =/ but i'm better now :)

Short, yet very good written.
Take cae

Is Sol supposed to be a condensed version of *Soul* ?

Other than that, I'm not the biggest fan of Haiku's and before I post this comment, I'll try and read it again...

I can't say I enjoyed it, and I can't say that I'm really into it... It was good for the style, but even professionally published Haiku's have never interested me. If there is a deeper meaning in it, I don't know, but I mean, I've written a few myself but I didn't really want to post themm....

But, I must say, interesting poem... Sorry for my lack of interest.

5/5
~Stephen White

It was a beautiful Haiku, I think it suits the season =)

TC

U got any poems u want me 2 look at gemma ?? xD im back

Simple and sweet, a very decadent treat. loved it! 5/5

I love nature poems and I`ve never seen a haiku especially for the solar universe..weird because it is just beautiful..as was this Haiku, I`ve always loved haikus..short but so powerful. Great job Dear !

5.5
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Beautiful!