Comments : I'll remember

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, what a wonderful poem. I love the flow. Great job!! Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    Now this is a very good poem. Short, sweet and succinct. Well ordered too. Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    A shorT buT beautifuL piecE 5/5 brilliantlY penneD. keeP writinG!

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    Aww...short and soo sweet...i love it...i know that a lot of people can relate to this poem and i really like you put your words...Great flow and get emotion and use of words...sorry i had to say it again! lol but yea 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Excellent. 5 as usual. :) I need to remember that small poems are good poems too.

  • 16 years ago

    by Vodka

    The way that you felt, and all the emotion put into this poem made it all the better. Great write, if I could give you a six then i would!

  • 16 years ago

    by Vodka

    I had to say more, the second time i read this it hit me so much more. It's like left overs, the more times you eat it, the better it tastes. Anyway, I just wanted to thank you for writing all of these poems. they are so great, and they always hit me so hard. I think that you are a beautiful poet, and musician, and that you will excel greatly in your life. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Omg, i loved it. it was amazing, it was sweet and than at the end you said the final embrace and wow. it was so emotional and deep. great work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    This is amazing. i absolutely love it! the flow was great and so was the wording. and it helped a lot that i know how that feels.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was quite the enjoyable read. The word choice was simple and effective the flow chanting. A sweet piece which was fully of love and great emotions. Well done on writing this poem. Keep up the good work. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Lindsay

    So simple yet so elegant! I loved it :) I smiled the whole way through. Nice work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Fist two stanzas are incredible and they are written amazingly. Last two stanzas are bad. This is just my opinion but I think that you could write them better. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    Concise yet it held vast meanings. I really love the way it flowed and simplicity of each line. Not bad at all. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Yvonne

    Aw! Cute! It was so simple, and yet so beautiful! Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    This was really sweet!...good job!!
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    So sweet kind of pushing cutesy, but it works. The flow was great. Message was good. 5/5 from me.