Comments : Drink Drank Drunk

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaila

    Hehe it's cute!
    I like it.
    It's nice and simple
    and the rhymes were good
    nice work
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Riz

    LMFAO! Oh my gosh! It's also a tongue twister! Drinkdrankdrunk-jing-jeng-Ugh! T~T I meesed up. LOL. I'm adding this to my favs. 5/5

    • 3 years ago

      by Angela

      Thank you so much! So nice to come back and read my old poems and see such nice comments!

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    Ha ha ha lol this is kinda funny. You kept it short and sweet. :D. I like the repitition

    Keep it up
    Fsams

  • 10 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Hehehe. As long as you dont drive your car drinking because that is an offense

  • 10 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    You're silly. You should make a long funny poem so there is more to critisize (<---ahhh how do you spell that!) Heh go read this one of mine---->Insane
    I labled it under dark because it's kind of twisted. Should I switch it to funny? Oh yeah I shall give you a four. ---->4

  • 10 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    LOL that is cute.. i think you should make another one but a lil longer...your a good writter if that could come to you in seconds...keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Birgit

    Yeah, it is cute and simple indeed ^^ Hihi.

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    It was spontanous and really funny!

    5/5 David

    • 3 years ago

      by Angela

      Thank you so much! So nice to come back and read my old poems and see such nice comments!

  • 10 years ago

    by Ixora

    Lmao i was just thinking this would be a great poem to say when ur drunk :P

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    Mk, I think I got the idea correctly, now! Man, you sounded like a drunk. Ha! {;) Dismissing the usual poetry analysis, I took pleasure in reading such adorable children's verses as this. Cute is a nice word which bests describes this one, I believe.

    Thanks for sharing.

  • 10 years ago

    by BEAUTIFULL

    *SMILEZ* I LUV IT!!!ITZ SO CUTE!!:]

  • 10 years ago

    by brokenxxxheartedx3

    Lol i love i am so adding it to my favs.

    my question is whered it come from? lol and what were you doing lol kidding

  • 10 years ago

    by Tiffaney

    Thats weird

  • 10 years ago

    by Veamm

    Nice^^ haha

  • 10 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww it's cute. =P I think the rhymes were cute with the drunk and funk part lol. But the second line kinda made me go...huh? o.O It seemed a little long for the rest of the lines. Haha, good job. ^_^ 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 10 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Such a cute lil poem!! It was so amusing, I think I actually laughed out loud. haha. Good job.

  • 10 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    Aww so cute
    the rhyming is very cute
    good job

  • 10 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    That's adorable.. I love the flow. If that came to you in seconds, I find you incredibly talented.

    • 3 years ago

      by Angela

      Thank you so much! So nice to come back and read my old poems and see such nice comments!

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought it was actually a really great
    short poem
    and the simplicity was nice
    and the bluntness
    tied it all together

    Well i like the idea of it
    and the rhyming was good

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful and Crazy

    I like that it rhymes, but a little too short.