Direction of Mind

by Angela   Jul 29, 2007


Theres an angel in the water
looking back at me
no signs, signals, symbols
telling her whats she's going to be

She knows she's all alone now
hidden beneath the depths at sea
it looks as if shes reaching out
and trying to speak to me

I think she's saying don't turn back
you're headed the right way
she became my heart and soul that night
she's been with me everyday

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  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    The flow was nearly flawless and the stanzas were pretty good.I just wish it wasn't so short.All in all though it was a brilliant write.4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Another short and yet beautiful poem. I love the originality I see with all of your writing so far. You have a great talent! 5/5

    marcella

    • 10 years ago

      by Angela

      Thanks again!

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    I loved it
    my favorite lines are
    you're headed the right way
    she became my heart and soul that night
    she's been with me everyday

    well done
    keep the good work up
    5/5
    your friend
    Rohan:-)

    • 10 years ago

      by Angela

      Thank you! It is so nice to come back years later and read my old poems and comments!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Aww it's sweet. :) I'll give it a four.

  • 16 years ago

    by disturbed one

    I liked this one, it was different from lots of other poems....good job

    5/5

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