Comments : Direction of Mind

  • 11 years ago

    by Birgit

    I like the flow in your poems! They are really good. =) And that's why I wish your poems would be a little longer.. cause you really have the talent to write longer poems =] There's nothing I could say that would make it better. =) I love it.
    5/5

    • 4 years ago

      by Angela

      Thank you again!

  • 11 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow.
    I really really like this poem.
    its' quite amazing.
    Maybe capitalization would help the flow a bit?
    I'm not sure though, BUT the flow is fine.
    Dont' get me wrong.
    xD
    goodjob.

  • 11 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Wonderful! And finally a poem that flowed flawlessly!

  • 11 years ago

    by Debbie

    Angela,

    This piece was real nice. How lovely. =] The idea of finding your spirit guide (or inner self) in the fullness of time really appealed to me. There's nothing much to critique about your poems, since most of them are simply well-written, comprehensible, and quite enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing, m'dear.

    Take care,
    Marian

    • 4 years ago

      by Angela

      Thank you again! I'll be writing a piece for my Miss Canada Pageant, wish me luck!

  • 11 years ago

    by disturbed one

    I liked this one, it was different from lots of other poems....good job

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Aww it's sweet. :) I'll give it a four.

  • 11 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    I loved it
    my favorite lines are
    you're headed the right way
    she became my heart and soul that night
    she's been with me everyday

    well done
    keep the good work up
    5/5
    your friend
    Rohan:-)

    • 4 years ago

      by Angela

      Thank you! It is so nice to come back years later and read my old poems and comments!

  • 11 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Another short and yet beautiful poem. I love the originality I see with all of your writing so far. You have a great talent! 5/5

    marcella

    • 4 years ago

      by Angela

      Thanks again!

  • The flow was nearly flawless and the stanzas were pretty good.I just wish it wasn't so short.All in all though it was a brilliant write.4/5