I like the flow in your poems! They are really good. =) And that's why I wish your poems would be a little longer.. cause you really have the talent to write longer poems =] There's nothing I could say that would make it better. =) I love it.
This piece was real nice. How lovely. =] The idea of finding your spirit guide (or inner self) in the fullness of time really appealed to me. There's nothing much to critique about your poems, since most of them are simply well-written, comprehensible, and quite enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing, m'dear.