Comments : Emotionless

  • 10 years ago

    by elle

    Heaps cool poem, really liked it.
    with love
    elle

  • 10 years ago

    by ABake

    Wow. That was some really deep emotion.
    Your flow was amazing. I love the way your portray everything. You can say I was quite captivated!
    But one thing, maybe try and use capitalization?
    But other than that, great job!
    5/5
    ((Amber))

  • 9 years ago

    by Poet

    That's really good hun

  • 9 years ago

    by paths of peace

    Omg this is amazing.
    it just sucks how he did that.
    right? yeah i know.
    gawd. but im still going through the process of crying all night.
    i guess your right, i will get tired.
    i really like this one bcuz it helped me.
    i read it every day. and i feel something different every time. AMAZING.
    heyy you should mssg me(: