Wow. That was some really deep emotion.
Your flow was amazing. I love the way your portray everything. You can say I was quite captivated!
But one thing, maybe try and use capitalization?
But other than that, great job!
Omg this is amazing.
it just sucks how he did that.
right? yeah i know.
gawd. but im still going through the process of crying all night.
i guess your right, i will get tired.
i really like this one bcuz it helped me.
i read it every day. and i feel something different every time. AMAZING.
heyy you should mssg me(: