This is the best one I've read from you =] I like it ^_^ This is my favorite stanza:
"Many problem passed me by,
many girls offered to be mine
but i denied them a many times
because your the one my heart signed."
5/5 =]
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Thats pretty good i liked it please check out mine k

That was pretty good please check out my poems thanks

Great job on this one like I said ^_^ Flow is good and emotions *which I think is the most important part of a poem no matter what* were great also =) I give it a 5 ^_^
Rhea

Oiiiiii....in love......good flow....emotions really touches in....

5/5

(",)

I mean touch

I like this poem but like....it's confusing..is it suppose to be past tense or present? it's hard to understand example
'I wish that you love me too,
I wish that you want me also
I wish that you will be for ever
and I wish that my wish will come true."

Shouldnt it be like I hope you love me too? or like, I wish you loved me too? =S im confussed...and some grammar is wrong, u miss out like one letters to a word and that is sorta annoying and also the first paragraph, is kidah random and jumbled...they are randomly strung together, and the lines are all quite the same.. ur third paragraph was cute, I liked the signed bit..
I think this poem needs a little work,
It's on the way to being something great,
Hidden

It's sweet, and sounds sincere, <3 keep it up 5/5 for genuineness (yes its an actual word lol :P )

It's pretty good for a beginer...I'll have to wait for some new poems...

I really liked this a lot. Good job.

I like the first stanza but you used word music twice in it, that leaves bad impression. (you can put sad melody) Ending isn't effective, the last stanza could be more powerful. This is just my opinion.

Ur poems are really good keep it up
xx

Its great!!

i can feel the despair..and the emotions..

keep it up!

I liked this poem but I think it could be much better. It has the emotion but that last stanza just drags the whole piece down which is a shame as it starts well.
I would change it to something like
" I wish that you loved me too
that you would want me also
to be with me forever
for my wish to come true"
This is only a suggestion though and it's your poem but that's what I think would make it better.