Die

Being sad means not being emotional..its just the nature of sadness..the flow is right but the usage of words "die" is to much..well i think its part of your poem..but uhm try to use some words to make it sounds more deeper..like instead of "die"
use some words that has the same meaning..

keep it up!

This poem was very deep, it expressed emotion's some of us just burry deep inside.
I really enjoyed the iron realization:)

However.. In this stanza.

'If I die, I didn't know what is your reaction,
if you can be happy or sad
but I surely say that your problem died
because I'm the problem that you want to die'

^The wording in this stanza was a little confusing. But if you try too clear it up, it will be a very effective stanza.

You ended this peice with a twist,
I really enjoyed this peice.
Keep writting,
5/5 Elaine.

Deep poem, You say alot in this poem, but it really needs to be clear, very mixed not going so well together, but it really is like an idea for something bigger, but that is only my opinion! :)
I really enjoyed for the emotion set so good!
5/5

Your a very talented writer well done
xx

This was okay. There's quite a few mistakes, but the emotion is there and that's what I like. Sweet job.