Comments : Dear Father....

  • 10 years ago

    by Madelaine

    Thats really sad! I love how you used your words! I am so sorry that you have to go through that! I don't know what its like, but from your poem I guess its hard! I really hope things get better for you!

  • 9 years ago

    by Manda

    Wow this is sad and deep.... :(

  • 9 years ago

    by Andrew

    " i would dream of happy times, the fairy tales you told me and small nursery rhymes, then i woke up screaming because i remember you not there but i still scream "I WANT YOU DADDY" this part i can interprate in so many ways, it reminds me of alot. Nice work

  • OMG! that was really touchy. It made me sad *tear* .. i kinda know how you feel since i dnt have a dad... :[

  • OMG! that was really touchy. It made me sad *tear* .. i kinda know how you feel since i dnt have a dad... :[

  • 1 week ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    awesome .... :)