Beautiful imagination and realistic description....nicely done...keep writing...Hoping to read of your poems...take care and keep smiling always...

Wahao.. damn beautiful .. loved the imagery.. a really beautiful piece..Loved It !

~Wake~

Wow. Wonderful.
This a -perfect- nature poem. It was so beautiful && creative. You had wonderful imagery && it was very descriptive. Fantastic job. 5.5 Keep writing. :]

- Stephyy <3

Breathtaking. The seeming comparison of the elements of nature to the elements of a disco is captivating. You write your theme with charming details that make it wholly magical and delightful to read. Truly a pleasurable read. All the best.

Chavii
I don't know how I missed this beautiful poem. The imagery is awesome.

Illuminating the white body of hers into that of a sparkling golden evening queen,
Becoming an inspiration for a poem, to a poetess beneath.

I loved these lines.
Excellent job!
Take Care Your Friend Cindy

Chavii
I don't know how I missed this beautiful poem. The imagery is awesome.

Illuminating the white body of hers into that of a sparkling golden evening queen,
Becoming an inspiration for a poem, to a poetess beneath.

I loved these lines.
Excellent job!
Take Care Your Friend Cindy

5/5.Fantastic write.Beautiful imagery.Chavii,keep it up.

Awwwwww.. such perfect imagery ..wow ..such finally crafted lines fill my heart with so much emotion.. loved it .
simply beautiful

~Wake~

I love the title of this poem and even better the poem itself a lovely lil piece great work xox sam

Very good write my friend. beautiful smooth flow. 5/5 from me. ben thompson

I love how you're unique and use such detail in your work

This is defo going on my faves!!
Wow, you should be so proud of this one, such a beautiful nature piece..
Very unique!
5/5
*gem*

This was absolutely stunning. I fell in love with this after i read the first line. I like the structure of it and i like how you mentioned that it was an inspiration to you. Yet another beautiful write from you. Thank you for the comment on mine :)
thanks
~*~Amber~*~