Running Low On Strength.

by ABake   Jul 31, 2007


It's becoming extremely complicated,
I am afraid I can no longer hold on.
Lets face the reality, my feelings for you are gone.

I never thought I'd give up,
For our relationship I would go to any length.
But lately, I am running low on strength.

It's not easy for me to do this,
I really don't want to tear your world apart.
I'm sorry, but I have to listen to my heart.

A tear slides down your cheek, I whisper goodbye.
My mind is saying turn around, heart screaming let go.
I become frantic, what to do, I just don't know.

I turn and look back, tears are falling from your eyes.
You mouth I love you, it no longer feels the same.
It has nothing to do with you, I am the one to blame.

I was running low on strength,
My grip loosening, my hold no longer tight.
I'm sorry, but being with you, no longer feels right.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alicja B

    Oh wow!
    i wrote a poem that has the same purpose
    but yours is so much better!
    check it out if youd like
    its called
    A Graceful Swan
    thanks :)

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    The rhyming in this piece is good but the flow is little off in some parts. You could use some more metaphors for your emotions. I don't want to offend you in any way, just giving constructive critic.
    Anyway, the poem is nicely written, I like its form and the whole idea.

  • 16 years ago

    by the come back

    Nice poem i love to read it ^_^ 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Aw great poem! It reminds me of something I just went through. You put all that emotion into words! Great job!
    Like Mo, I liked the three lines to a stanze and the rhyming. It was original and very nicely done! Keep it up!

    ~Morgan~

  • 16 years ago

    by Mo

    Very well done! Amazing that you can write so deeply at such a tender age - its going to serve you well throughout life.

    Loved the 3 lines to a stanza and the different rhyming technique.

    Mo

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