Love Kills

by schylar   Jul 31, 2007


What do you do
when the only one you love,
the only one you trust,
the only one you have,
turns their back on you.
Leaves you to face this world
of lies, hate, and deception, ALONE.
No one to comfort you,
no one one to hold you,
no one to love you.
You opened up and let him in,
you gave him you're love,
you're trust,
you're heart,
you gave him you're identity.
You put you're life and you're future
in his hands,
but he took the only thing in this world
that was important to you.
He took the one thing out of you're
life that meant everything to you,
himself.
You went from having everything you could want,
to having less than nothing.
Now you're left to battle the road ahead
without him.
It's like going to war without gun.
You have no protection,
no restitution,
nothing.
The only thing left is a shattered heart
and a dysfunctional mind.
You have what he wants you to have,
unbearable heartache,
and undeniable loss.
You have nothing more to live for
except an eternity of torture.

(PLEASE COMMENT ON THIS, I NEED TO KNOW IF IT'S AS GOOD AS I THINK IT IS. I WILL RETURN THE FAVOR)

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  • 15 years ago

    by DarkxPrincess1991

    This is really really good

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Great job!!! its really relateable it hurts when someone does that but you realize that if they could hurt you like that u deserve better anyway great poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    I like what you wrote.
    It was really nice.
    Personaly, I read better when the poem is written in stanza's. So I can easy find the right flow.
    But except that, it's a good poem.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Its great...keep it up=]p

  • 16 years ago

    by Dance Girlie

    I like what's coming across in your words, but i couldn't find a beat. try to split it up, with a little more consistancy. :]