The anger

by Marius Laun   Aug 1, 2007


The anger is rising
from my head to my toes
When will it stop?
Nobody knows

This anger is growing
more each day
And there's nothing
anyone can do or say

It will swell up inside me
and devour me whole
It will swallow my body
and possibly my soul

I can't control it
Believe me I tried
I can only suppress it
Until I have died

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  • 16 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    Unique and interesting. You really take my breath away with every words and every thing you portray. Keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very original and interesting piece. You expressed anger greatly. Every stanza is superb but my favorite is third. This piece really deserves 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. the rhyming was in simple words but i think that is what made it so good. great work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Vodka

    WOW. That much anger isn't healthy... But it was a great poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I feel this way a lot nowadays! 5/5

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