This was good laura, it was short, but it was deep and true, but sad.
the flow was good as well, and the rhyming was very strong.
i loved it
5/5
gabriella

Hey,
well this is another great poem of your that I absolutely love.
the flow was great, the emotions runs so deep. and generally the whole thing was penned so well.
i was taken away by this stanza in particular:

Memories are gone
Because it was never real
How can you remember
If there was nothing there to feel

^sigh. I know what you mean. But I am very much hoping you are ok hunn. and that there is hope. but anyways i'm not gonna try to convince you on here. just PM me for anything.

the poem was great! sorrowful but just beautifully writen.
keep it up! =]
--Viola

A tear for every word
That is left unsaid
They fall from my face
As I sit on my bed

those were my fav. lines! this poem was absolutley beautiful!it really touched me! i have seen sum of your other stuff and well you are really great!And this was really great! great job! im super impressed!

Another amazing piece of work by you. It was so touching. I could feel the sorrow in each word. And I......
Great job deep it up. 5/5 from me.

Very elegant, and extremely emotional.

Suggestion?
You started strong, you ended well. Somewhere in the middle the stanzas were a bit more blah.

But, all the same, nice job.

Wow girl these are some deep words keep it up. and don't let anyone make you feel soo bad. i truly feel your pain. smile and take care!!

The first two stanzas made me cry ;~;. I don't know why but it was just so emotional. I loved it! It was really, really emotional. I hope you feel better. 5/5

Beautiful dear, the word choice and the flow is great. The words strung beautifully to each other. I like the way you have structured and made it cohesive. 5/5
tc
Fsams

Wow i loved your poem, it was so emotional and just awesome. good jobs

This was so heartfelt, but i could see every word was right from ur heart,which made it a great poem.
i really adore your talent as you are truly an artist , mastering the art of poetry.

This is so moving Laura. I think this is my favorite verse:

"How many tears
Can be in one eye
You can never imagine
The ones that I cry"

I think we can all see this point of view...

Wow!That was a really good poemI know what it's like to just sit and cry and cry and cry until I can't cry anymore.I personally relate to this poem and I know a lot of others can as well.Very good.5/5

<3Amber

Laura, very nicely written! I could feel the emotion seep out of your words and the flow was perfect. Thanks for you comment! :)
5/5
Ciao

Wow simply b-e-a-utiful
I like the lines how many tears can be in 1 eye

that is deep and touching b/c we've all had times when we cried our eyes love this poem mwah mwah

The tear is left unheard
But as it falls it screams
`i LOVE the , I think it's called, personification ? there . It really jumped at me .

Memories are gone
Because it was never real
How can you remember
If there was nothing there to feel
`Beautiful stanza . Loved it .

And the ending is perfect . So true to so many of us -- at point someone feels this way and some just won't accept that we aren't really LiViNG because of our fears .

Nice job, hon .
..__MiNDYY

That was so beautifully sad.

"The tear is left unheard
But as it falls it screams
I don't want to return
To my horrible dreams"

Thats my favorite stanza. I really liked the second line best. I've never heard anyone talk about crying like this. Its brilliant!

The first stanza's flow was a little rocky, it wasnt as smooth as the rest of the poem, but once it got going it was smooth and clear.
Great Job!

~Mo~

Huh very good u did nice keep in touch babe lol bye

I thought it was really good can u add ur comment to my poems atleast one of them plz and give me advice on how to make em good

Wow...that seriously left me speechless O_O a good speechless. the flow was amazing and it gives you chills. once again, good chills. you can almost feel the tears coming down. you are such a great writer!!! keep it up, love!

I truly enjoyed it..well try to read my piece too..lol..nicely done..5/5