The Mansion Door...

by Rachel   Aug 2, 2007


The mansion door, beautiful diamonds and gems covering the door with a layer of silver lining. Like a large length of ocean. The door glistens through the silver specks of moonlight. Silver door knobs showing great power. Shining like a beautiful bright star. You open the door creaking loudly in the soft silence. SLAM! Your inside, the princesses room.

A hush of wind passes you by while you step slowly into the dim room. Letting go moonlight sparks. Feeling so cold but when a yellow, bright light comes on, you can feel the amazing soul of the dead silent room. Starring at the most amazing art. like a beautiful white rose, so smooth and beautiful. A piano chimming its soft meaningful notes. Tears flowing on an amazing structure. Furniture as elegant as the Queen's throne.

The princess, wearing a long lengthed silver gown. With a diamond tiara full of power and grace. Sitting on the windowsill with a drawn face of sadness in her deep blue eyes. Its like she's blended into the mysterious silver room. A tear full of anger and despair dripping down her pale face. She's alone, her heart needing to be rescued before its lost forever....

Her wicked dad not letting her see her true love. Stuck in this forbidden room. You hear echoing footsteps behind you. It's her true love coming to rescue the princess heart. He held the princess in his arms. As tender lips start to touch. Angels coming upon them, vanishing death and sadness and bringing happiness and peace to the world.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jerbear

    Very good, it seems like something i woud fantasise about. very detailed, good job, i gave it a five!

    ~Jerbear