Time

by GretaInsideOut   Aug 2, 2007


Time ticking away this hour,
Moon swept shadows along my face.
Solemn sorrys put to no end,
With a frantic dream to trace the time,
Time of no end,
Time of all.

Calling those who will not answer,
Forging a happy face to weep,
The time is bearing so slowly,
Time ticking away this day.

Colorless change within these walls,
A tiny fault of color pushed between the lines,
Grey house, grey dreams,
The time you wasted.

A field of pain you spread around,
Freedom had it's moment in your gaze,
Beauty you overlook today,
Time ticking away this collision.

Determined souls fuse together doubt,
Pretentious hate among your love,
Cloudy daze fog your memory,
Time elapses into nothing.

Happy faces flee for hope,
Vivacious minds without a dream,
Inclined to perish in the sun,
Time ticking by,
Timely days,
Time ticks away this life.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    I've always loved poems about time, and you managed to write a very good one about it. I love the use you put it in.

    (b'.')b

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, this is just amazing, you should be proud on your self, topic is excellent and you created truly impressing and breathtaking atmosphere in it. I love every line, it is just so impressing.

    -Time ticking away this hour,
    Moon swept shadows along my face.
    Solemn sorrys put to no end,
    With a frantic dream to trace the time,
    Time of no end,
    Time of all.
    Calling those who will not answer-

    ^This seven lines left me without the words, they are totally incredible.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Great piece of work!!

    God bless u

  • 16 years ago

    by tears i cry

    To be honest ive been trying to write a poem bout time for ages but i cant seem to get a good flow
    you on the other hand seemed to have handled it very well
    5/5 again

  • 16 years ago

    by Shadows Reign

    Wow. Beautifully done. You have used some very nice words, well done.

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