Sadly gorgeous . A beautiful frustration . You captured my attention immediately with the brilliantly written first stanza . It's somewhat dark, but holds a deep emotion that makes it strikingly stunning . I loved it .

Applauded .

..__MiNDYY

The beginning was definitely my favorite part of the poem. You were able to express your feelings very well. It was well done and the flow was pretty good. Keep up the good work.

Nice write. The dismal sadness drawn out by the characters is dismaying. Certain lines needs tightening-up to augment the flow, whereas the pitch is slightly plaintive and emotions raw and well put into words. The images you portrayed seems unpleasantly cold akin to the situation in progress. Nicely done. ~Marian

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I really like the poem.. im not too fond of "But darling, I'm sorry, I never meant to hurt you ,
Even though that I knew I probably would,
Maybe I just thought my ways would change..
Or maybe at the time I didn't care."

it doesnt really fit i cant figure out how or why but it doesnt..

but all in all it turned out really good :D

I like the poem, but

But darling, I'm sorry, I never meant to hurt you ,
Even though that I knew I probably would,
Maybe I just thought my ways would change..
Or maybe at the time I didn't care.

just doesnt... fit.
i dont know...
but its a very good poem. 4/5.