I love how you started it and finished the peom, the message was very strong and I as a reader could feel what you were trying to say. And + I can tottally relate...isn't it sad.....sigh* my life...but excellent, good work, you are really good at what you do
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GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was beautifully written!
U have great tallent!!!

I like how you brought up a question in this stanza. this poem has a really nice flow

This is an amazing poem, i loved the flow and the story behind it. It had a sweet twist, that so many of us can relate to. You're so talented, I really enjoyed it. The first sentence
"I'm dying for that moment" that dragged me in, wondering the contrast between the title and the first line. Great job!

It makes me wanna cry.. my bf and i just broke up the other night =[.. great poem