Comments : Lips Bearing Equality

  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    OMFG!
    How could u not tell mi u had new 1!
    honestly i hv 2 sai dis is the greatest poem i hv read in a long....... time! you have the power to use words as a weaponn and not guns as those who are cowards would. remember power never empowers it only breaks you but to have a way with words and have the power to change for the better is something totally different that power is what the world needs to heal the wounds to wat society and the evils in our world have created.
    I luv it! n ILY!
    Happi b'day!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Makaveli
    Excellent job on this piece. Very thought provoking.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    You've said it all, what else can I say, great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Keith

    Good poem, i take it this is a dig at the australian government :P lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Koreena

    This is a great poem. It really makes you stop and think about society! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, amazing topic and this one has excellent message. It is very true and you wrote it superbly, atmosphere is also good and your wording is great.
    Well done! This one deserves 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ari

    When I first read this, I thought it didn't sound like a poem. But then I realized that it just added to the effect. This is a beautifully written, very thought-provoking poem. Every line is true. Great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by dalllllal

    This is by far my most favorite !! such truth in twisted words

  • 15 years ago

    by Miko

    Well done!
    Jessi