Very good
totally sums up a nice gradguation
imagery was fantastic
5/5
kaila

I once wanted to do something like this, but I abandoned it. Anyway, this is good! 5/5

I enjoyed this, simple yet filled with so much meaning and emotion.

Imagery portrayed in this was wonderful, it is like the reader can see everything that is happening.

Beautiful ending...full of intensity and power.

Beautifully and elegantly written.