Comments : A Flow Of Death

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    Oh i like this poem its so sweet
    Then you shall still remain my poem,
    but with different words,
    more fantastic than the words before.
    i really liked that stanza this poem is a 5/5 the flow was great this was beautiful!

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem
    you wrote this awesomely
    i agree with rose
    that stanza was awesome
    though there is kinda a sad touch to this poem
    but it is also happy also
    great job

    Keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Wow you can sure write Alissa the choice of wors is amazing...good job

    ashleigh

  • 16 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    That was really good, I find it sort of hard to write unless it is personal experiance, that was great, I think If i hadn't known about where the inspiration for this came for before I read it I would have liked it better, but It was still great. Good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow great, very beautiful word choice and awesome flow. The structure is beautiful and the wole poem is very cohesive :) 5/5

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Wow realy don't know to describe it. I hate reading long poems yet i really did enjoy this one... it was awesome the desciption of words, vocab, the flow and the emotions as in it was wow!! Great job, keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Mmm so sweet :) This is something so different! In very good way. Every line was so beautiful, and flow was great. Also, it was very deep and makes it somehow also powerful for me.Which is great! Only good words :)
    Keep on writing 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lindsay

    Your word choice was amazing :)
    Nice flow and an excellent poem overall! 5/5

    --Lins.

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    AMAZING.. absolutely amazing.. brilliantly penned and a superbly expressed piece of art !

    Loved it

    keep it up

    ~Wake~

  • 16 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    This actually gave me goosebumps, it was absolutely beautiful, the whole poem flowed through until the imagery of death arrived, which i thought ended it fantastically. 5/5 xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by SooperMann

    Woow this is deep. really great!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very beautiful poem, cohesive and coherent with the captiona nd flowing well. Change "or each vocals sang" sang to sung. I loved this piece. Keep it going

    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Wow.
    that simply astonished me, normally i don't really like love poems very much, cause they usually sound very cheesy and forced, but this was absolutely gorgeous. i added it to my fav's
    the flow was perfect, the words and the rythm were beautiful.
    5/5
    gabriella

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Good poem...i've said before that nonrhyming poems dont really interest me but this one does...i really like it.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    You are as a poem to me
    that I memorize word for word,
    that I reread until the morning arrives.
    ^this is the greatest stanza.
    This poem is beautifully written. It is long but interesting. Atmosphere is very original. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    Wow i really like this it had a lot of emotion and i can really understand wat your tryin to say in every word that i read! Great PEN your a great poet...keep it up dont stop writting!

  • 16 years ago

    by cassanova

    That is crazy different... maybe you would like my style check out my poems ..."I WISH*"

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    It was different, sad and sweet all in one, and you did a wonderful job.
    i loved the way it was so interesting and youd think it would put you off being so long but it didnt.
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    I loved this poem! It was amazingly written. I enjoyed the style! The emotion was really powerful. Keep up the amazing work!