I love the way you put your heart in this and you made it so deep and meaningful to yourself and others. Just maybe watch the flow a little, thats all. 5/5.
<3Raych

Wow you did put some soul into this poem. I can say that even though this is a 'Suicide Note' it is still meaningful.

It didnt flow as well as your other work..but i like the concept of it..saying one thing and then thinking another..though i dont believe in comparing ones pain..for if its painful for the person thats all that matters...but good job with the poem..keep it up.