OMG!!...OMG!!!..well what can i say...
thisi s truelly a brilliant piece!!, it had me hooked right from the start!!..this beautifully penned and the words and the flow was brilliant!....it makes the reader want to find out what happens in the end!!

all i can say is gr8 job!!
5/5
for me
tkcare
bree

Andrew
Nice job on your contest poem. Brings tears to the eyes. This happens too many times.
Take Care Cindy

This is so true and patriotic. 5/5

Wow...0_o

i love reading poems and stuff.. but
this is the first time
i'm rating someone a 5..=)

this is awesome!!
wish i could write like this..=)