This poem is very emotional... so sad. Greatly written. You did good job with rhymes.
5/5 from me

HI, you cammented one of my poems, so i decided to check out some of your's. i really like this one, i can easily relate to it. i give it 5 stars (*****) ha..ha. ~schylar~

Deep and sad, yet wonderful. 5/5

Wow I feel the emotion you write this piece with, It
made my spine tingle, wonderful poem and yet so sad.

90% rhyming piece with a good qord choice. True and pure are polysems that doesnt rhyme so you could revise the poem a little bit. Overall its good :)

Tc
Fsams

90% rhyming piece with a good qord choice. True and pure are polysems that doesnt rhyme so you could revise the poem a little bit. Overall its good :)

Tc
Fsams

A great poem!! at first, it is as if falling in love was the greatest thing ever happen but then a sudden twist came at the end.. sad.. deep..
excellent!

I can really relate on this poem! cheers.. :-)

" Two Thumbs Up..." xD

Now feel my sorrow
Know my pain
Like after sunshine there comes rain

amazingly penned.. another awesome write.. keep it up

Loved it.

~Wake~

Very beautiful poem, well written and so full of emotions, sad but it was very good, great job, keep it up ,,your friend Tracy d 5/5

Nice job on this piece. The sadness and dispair can be felt in your words.
Take care Cindy

Beautiful sad poem you penned here, flow well within beautiful expressed emotions...."there still have for tomorrow." have a good day, take care...

Nicely written. I liked how it transitioned at the middle: very neat. Emotions were truly capturing, indeed. All the best.

WOW GIRL I LIKE YOUR POEM ITS SO TRUE WHAT YOU WROTE!!!! I LOVE IT!!

I loved your poem i could feel the emotion you wrote i can relate to it so many times well i hope that you will keep writing cant wait to read your peoms 5/5 keep it going

Hey i really, like ur poem, it wud have been soo kwl if i was this good at writing poems, lol, oh well, 5/5 :)

I like it very much
you just mispelt feel-ed (i can't spell either)
very nice =]

Very beautiful poem, and very well written, 5/5

Full of emotions.. wonderful piece!

This is such an emotional piece and well written.

Cicely

I really like this poem. You get across your message of elation leading to sadness, which is what poetry is all about. I really like the contrast from being so happy that everythig is perfect, to feeling like you want to die cause your whole world has fallen apart. Great poem, which i really enjoyed reading.

Kelly
xx