Comments : Nothing Gold Can Stay

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is frikken awesome...I love this.
    You've outdone yourself on this poem.
    The imagery you created here is breathtaking, wording and rhyme scheme are, as always, enjoyable and the message behind the words both powerful and moving...well done with this piece.

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Greatly written poem. It is very deep and true.
    I like the choice of words in it. Third stanza is my favorite, it is excellently written. I like the metaphor with the four seasons very much.
    5/5 from me

  • 10 years ago

    by SeXiSaMi

    I loved this poem... and i liked how you explained what it meant at the end, i went back and read it once more, picturing a little child growing up throughout the seasons. it was awesome. great selection of words! well done!
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by unknown

    Great poem... :)
    It has a good rythym in every stanza but the second, unfortunately..
    Why you doing that? I know you must realize it.. ^^
    And the title is not a common title. Makes people want to read your poem.. Nice idea...
    The flow was good I think. ^^
    Well done.. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Nix

    Deep.... I like rhyming in this poem very much. This piece has really strong message and you wrote it greatly. Ending is superb. This piece really deserves 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    You really captured what you where trying to say! this peice is absolutly amazing! The flow was perfect, the word choice great, and over all it was intensly unique.
    This peice deserves 5/5 no less.

    Well Done,
    Elaine.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lindsay

    Such a deep poem! :) I loved reading this very much. It has a beautiful flow and had some tip top word choice. Nicely done! 5/5!

    --Lindsay.

  • 10 years ago

    by Sara

    Wow! i lovedd it! and Billie agrees! i loved how each stanza had to do with another season.. your word choice was amazing... imagery was amazing as well... the flow was flawless, just like your poem... 5/5 from me, and keep it up! :]

  • 10 years ago

    by tears i cry

    It was a truely inspirational poem i love how you made it so relevent to life and how you made me understand that no matter how good or bad it is things will change just like the seasons do and i need that reassurance so thank you for you marvelous work 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by tears i cry

    It was a truely inspirational poem i love how you made it so relevent to life and how you made me understand that no matter how good or bad it is things will change just like the seasons do and i need that reassurance so thank you for you marvelous work 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Alissa

    Wow, this poem is so deep. The meaning is so unique and heartfelt. You did a great job by keeping the reader interested, you did a wonderful job. This is pure magic. I really loved this poem, the meaning is so much more than words. It drifted me into a new world, you did amazing!
    I loved the rhymes, the flow, the structure, the meaning. You did amazing!
    completely and totally 5/5!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    This poem was amazing you wrote it beautifully! i loved it! the whole time i could nto stop reading!! 5/5 the meaning was awesome i just loved it

  • 10 years ago

    by Austin

    I liked it but the only reason I gave it a four was because of the synopsis at teh end good progression of thought and use of words but its just a little thing of personal taste i liek to let readers pull what they want out of it but liek i say its no biggie greta poem

    please read The First Time I ever did anything

  • 10 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Yeah you have perfectly and amazingly penned your imagination and your message. really it was awesome, never tried reading poems about life coz i find it sleepy but then yours has an interesting flow, imagination and of course message that made it different from the rest. Well keep it up!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Quite an amazing flow, the lines seemed to flow just in order and I must admit, reather creative!! Nicely done and I really enjoyed it! its been a pleausre, 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow what a beautiful life poem. The word choice and the flow is so amazing. The imagery is very good. 5/5

    tc
    Fsams

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    So true, each word was so true and touching, i call this poem a lesson to everyone which was a great poem, as always your words has power in them that is why i call you a great poet.

    keep it up, a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is perfect beyond words! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    A certain feature of this work particularly gives warmth to my heart: the message, I believe. You capture your theme in an elaborate detail that makes it wholly engaging, compelling and delightful to read. I confess I have read various works pertaining to the cycle of life; whereas, in all fairness, there's a huge distinction in every piece to one another. This one even has its own individuality, approach, and beauty. I'm glad I got the opportunity to read, yet again, a material with delicious food for thoughts as this masterpiece of yours. I thank you for the said opportunity. All the best and take care. ~Marian

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I loved the descriptions and story all along the poem..Your wording was advanced and so suitable to the poem

    My fave lines are;

    Soon fall is upon us, once again change is apparent,
    We now begin to reminisce of past seasons of glory,

    Keep it up,
    Laura