Co0o0o0ol song

That was really deep, good job 5/5
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Very original, I like it very much. You write great dark poetry. I like the choice of words in this one, and the whole idea for the lyric is interesting. I like verse 3 the most, it has the most powerful atmosphere. 5/5

Yep its great, I would really love to sing it, but I dunno the tune. Really nice dear 5/5

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Wow!!! This song is incredible. I like every line you created unique and powerful imagery. Topic is excellent and original and you wrote it greatly! Wording is also amazing. This song truly deserves 5/5

I love this song... you displayed superb imagery in it.. 5/5 here

Cool I really liked it. I could just see some great dark rock band singing it. I gave it a 5/5.

I love the song
yes it was dark but your profile said
your good with dark poems
5/5
great job

Wow.. amazing song with such intense emotion and greatly combined words...5/5!