I liked the romantic feeling on those

But I have 3 points

First:I think I'm in love on you=I think I'm in love with you
Second:I'm totally love you:I totally love you

And third:capitalize the beginning letter

And It would be better

Keep it up,
Laura

I actually like it =] It's not bad at all. I would just take a look at your grammer.. example:

From the first time I saw you
I think I'm in love with you
Maybe it weird but it true
I totally love you

I would change this: Maybe it's weird but it's true. I am totally in love with you.

Or something like that =] Anyway, I'll give it a 4/5 =]
x

Wow i loved it the first stanza was a little iffy but truly after that it was excellent 5/5

Awww. it was a nice poem. such a great poem. you have talent. goodwork take care\ you deserve 5/5

It's long.. But eyecathing enough.. :)
Maybe you can make a girl fall in love with you if you read this poem for her.. Hahaha..

I'm confused with the second last line:
"but I thing makes me happier"
did you mean "but 1 thing makes me happier"?

Well done..
Keep up the good work.. :)

A sweet piece, which was held together nicely by romance. Well done on this poem. Keep up the good work. ~mel

One of my favorite poems....

Absolutely beautiful, cute and sweet love poem...loved it=)..5/5 for sure...Melody..=)

Wow ang sweet nman nito... ang galing mo naman medyo konting aus lng poh!!

The flow was a little off on most of the poem but the point of the poem was really good.. I liked it..

I want to hold your hands,
but my hands are too weak
I want to say I love you,
but my mouth does'nt speak

That stanza is my favorite part..

I love it, it's sweet... the only thing i would say to improve would be your grammar. 4/5 though =_=

This is my favourite of yours so far. It was very sweet, and you have much less mistakes in this than what you do in others. Very well done.

I thought this one stood out.
i like the way you expressed yourself in here.
but try not to use the same words
too much for it can make a wonderful
poem dull && boring. nonetheless, this
one is an exception :)
good job. i'll give you a 4/5
always leave room for a little improvement
:D

First stanza is great but I don't like second one. You expressed emotions greatly but you repeated word-sing- too many times.

Hmmm...nice poem...inlove????you are good in writing...ahhmm..by the way thanx for your comments.....hmmmmm....im speechless...

I love this one do damn much
xx well done

"Please love me too
that my wish to you
I know it's hard
but can you try to make it true?"

^^My favourite part, I found it to be beautifully written and so hopeful.
I enjoyed this piece, it was beautifully written.

Nicely done. I like it. But try to fix the typos, and it'd be great.

Tale care