Obstactles On My Journey

by njabulo b   Aug 10, 2007


My god what have i done
i dont remember myself taking any mans soul
lord can you observe that my heart is pure
since now im confused of this life
i dont expect to help me live
nor do i excpet to obscure my way either
but i look to my left i see an obstactles
and when i turn to the right i face the same thing
i cant go back and still i hardly go forward
can any one tell me why journey is full of obstactles

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  • 16 years ago

    by Johnnys Medicine

    I really love this poem
    such soul
    and yet there isnt a soul
    lol
    hmmm
    makes my brain itch with inspireation

  • 16 years ago

    by Khanyisile Cele

    Because that is what makes life interesting. The challenges that we face always makes us stronger and when you tell a story of where you come from and the obtacles that you had to pass to achieve your goals will make you proud.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Very much stirring, let them flourish.. 5/5
    Check for my new poem'favorite authors' - thanks

    Nazeer

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is sad. So much of life holds sadness. We always run into obstacles. We learn and grow from these hard times. It makes us wiser and stronger people.
    Nice write.
    Take care Cindy