ItS a finE piecE of worK, thaT thrilleD uS greatlY....

luzaN

What a very sad piece. Keep writing.
Take care Cindy

Very very nice i really like this one!

This is AWESOME. I used to cut myself so just the name got to me. its great keep up the work.
whitney

See its poems like these that people need to comment this is one of the best poems i have ever read 5/5 definitly<333

Very good piece of work. Razorblade games are never good but I hear them calling to me sometimes :( 5/5

I love it
it touched me heaps
and reminded me of someone I know
great work
xx

Wow. This is great. Beautiful stanzas.
Keep it up.

I love this poem each time I read it.
I noticed I never commented on it haha.
5/5

Cheers xo

Perfect
verry inperationaal
ive got bad spellin
todaay:/ its stufed up

ive noticed every ones poems quite are quite intelegent
im JELOUS!

A very nice poem, it was original and it seemed to have a message and emotion in it. I liked it alot 5/5

Well written.. the expression are well described..

but in some parts I felt that the words are forced.. but besides that its a good write..
one typo:

harts=hearts

keepwriting..

Can feel the anger and sadness in this
the flow was not off for even a second
this is excellant
you write so well
this is a 5/5

Wow...just wow

A deeply felt poem, writen so well. deff a 5/5 from me. well done and thanks for sharing

suicidal love xx

Wow what a great poem! It definitely scores a 5/5 for me! I got very caught up in your poem. It was very emotional. Thanks for sharing.

Beautifull poem carry alot of meaning and you write it in good way with nice flow and powerful words make it stronger my favorait part is when you say:I just want to hide in my bed
I need some mead to clear my head
I'm dying but you still won't see
I've crashed and fallen but this can't be.
may i love it the most as i feel it now
5/5 well done
keep write

Suicide is a common topic most especially in this site but then your work is somehow different from the poems in this poem coz this one can easily be visualize by the readers and some scenes or lines are easy to relate with..

I could visualize everything I was reading which is a good thing. Not everyone can do that in a poem. I thought it was really good and well written. Good job!!

Superb piece
great... simply great
and u deserve 5/5
it was complete sensible and touching