Comments : Love Pulled Us Through

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Aw cute. Thats a nice poem! The rhyming was great! The flow though...it got a little rocky at times, but it still sounds good. Some of the lines had emphasises (is that a word?) that made it hard to read, but sometimes it happens. The message of the poem is really cute and it was very nicely written. Keep it up!

    ~Mo~