Good bye my lover

by emptysole   Aug 11, 2007


I felt the rain against my face
longing for that love embrace
time will tell all my life's pain
trying not to hurt again

torn from my chest was my heart
horrendous pain from being apart
each breath I take I feel is the last
our time together had gone so fast

Into the shadows you slowly fade
but now my life is in a cascade
since you closed your eyes
I try to think but each time I cry

It hurts so much and I need you near,
I need you to help me with my fear,
now I can only look to the sky
how could god just let you die

I visit were in rest you will Always lay
to all the gods and to the clouds I pray
to never hurt like this again
I couldn't cope I would go insane

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lucy

    Thank you for the comment on my poem...your a good writer as well, although i dont see how someone could not be good, so i dont think that was a very unique compliment...i'd say your poetry is intriguing, well done...

    Leelee

  • 16 years ago

    by hayley williams

    Excellent, really like this xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Tito

    Lovely poem, very emotional, very good. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Rowena Smith

    Wow great poem! Very sad but I love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    I like it.
    Nicely put. It's sad.
    Thank you for commenting. :D
    I'll try&see if I can add more to it.